I quite liked that Harry. A sort of gentle comedy with a nice twist. I think you did a good job on the characters. There was something missing from the end where Eric is trying to make sense of it all. Part of me wanted to say good luck to Edith and another part felt sorry for the sad figure of Eric. Maybe paint Eric a bit darker so that her ‘escape’ is more triumphant. (I hope that’s not a spoiler.)
