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February 8, 2022 at 8:26 pm
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No worries! I haven’t named the baby at all, if it makes you feel better. Three chapters in, she’s still nameless :(
That’s deffo a warm and fuzzy approach. I was thinking dark rabbit hole :O.
Thank you for reading, and your thoughts, I’ve gone back and made some tweaks!