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Helen
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This story made me smile although I thought it was going to be something about an item of lost property rather than its owner. Always good to be surprised. I would like a little bit more physical description of the main character. Readers have different preferences and I always want to picture the characters. But the woman seems to stand out for me as much as much her neon-pink suitcase!
Thanks for sharing BRoll.