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BRoll
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Thanks for the help Emma! the original version ended one paragraph earlier with them leaving together, but i added the finale out of sympathy for all those (which selfishly includes me) who have perfectly enjoyable daydreams interrupted by the routine and maintenance of our lives. very much appreciate the feedback, it’s my turn now to think about it again… my thanks again to the three of you for the time and help!